Here is my negative headline, taken from the 'Daily Record' newspaper. I have tried to make this horrible headline seem a lot more positive until you have actually read it. I used a serif font as this makes it look more innocent than the story actually is. I have also created a calming background to distract from the sheer awfulness of the story in front of it.
I read the comment 'sheer awfulness' and thought you meant the cheesy drop shadow and soft focus effect you've put on the whole composition. This composition says strip club to me...you've taken all the elegance out of the type and made it very salacious indeed...even the purple takes away from the 'elegance' of it...
ReplyDeletePlus you only did half the exercise...